Ocelotlikespie's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[RED]

It's good.

I especially like the face. Nice one (as usual).
Now, I notice that as I go from up to down through this drawing, the coloring seems to be of less quality, and her shoes look rather squarish. I suggest you keep practising, and deliver the same ammount of work to every part of the drawing. I'll let the background slide this time.
Don't think of this review as an agressive one. I just want to help you to improve your skills.

- Ocelot-sensei (as I was once called by a Youtuber)

suwako responds:

thanks!
i know, idk what it is, i think i need to draw more scenery before i continue doing full illustrations. ah, well i tried to make them look like school shoes lol. guess i failed XD
oh, don't worry, i don't! i know you're only trying to help ^^
also, i took your advice about the eyes, i dunno if you can see it/i did it right ;_;

aha, i'll have to start calling you that so! XD

[Kick your own ass - THF]

Holy snap

That was, indeed, a kick ass improvement! You know, I'm gonna try and do this. Now to select a drawing...

suwako responds:

thanks!

oh, do! show me when you're done! <3

[Catgirl +collab+]

All right!

Excellent! Just perfect. Practice makes perfect. And I think you practiced enough. 5 stars!

suwako responds:

thanks so much!

[Sachi Eika UTAUloid Cover]

As I reviewed earlier...

You scored an "okay". The colors are fantastic, as usual, but this one doesn't really "get me". Saturday morning here in Portugal, I guess. I mean, it's not morning anymore, but it was when I reviewed this, so, um... It's like I said: "Ah, what the heck, just keep making these, you're a great artist". Here's an 8 for ya.

suwako responds:

;w;

thank you, you awesome person you XD

[apple]

I'm eating one right now.

And this makes me enjoy its deliciousness even more. Yummy!
The plate's a bit sloppy, though. Yeah, I know, it was the laser mouse's fault.

Dzhordzh responds:

lolz ) yeah laser mouse 4 sure ! :) thx

[Luna Online]

What can I say?

Well, besides the tree thing mentioned I think her finger is a little, uh, uncommon. Yes, I believe that it should be corrected or something.
So, other than that the drawing is pretty good. Keep practising. You're almost there.

suwako responds:

yeah, the hand is a bit odd alright XD
um, well it is quite easy to change the background, but not easy for the character, so sorry but i can't change her hand. DX
thanks though!

[The Joker]

Holy mother of Pearl!!!

Do you make comics for Marvel?!

vylent responds:

haha I wish I made thet kind of money :P

[Black Rock Shooter anime]

Nice

Your coloring is starting to get more "real" anime-like, I see.
Now, correct me if I'm mistaken, but the one on the right, her head looks a bit, let's say, peculiar. I've never seen this anime before, so I don't know if that's intended or a small flaw.
Overall, you're starting to color like a professional. Good job.

suwako responds:

well, this anime won't be out until next year, so my only references for the characters were like 3 screenshot preview things >.<
and in them, dead master (girl on the right) has her hair like that, so her hair is a little odd XD
and wow, thanks a bunch! i'm flattered!

[Girl Reading +collab+]

Very good!

The coloring and shading you did here were outstanding, as well as the drawing itself.

suwako responds:

thank you!

[Speed Paint exp]

Speed paint, huh?

Dang.
I was going to mention that the background could have more to it, but there's no need to. I specially like the shinyness that you put in some parts of the armor thing.

raveninskyprime responds:

But... the background really does leave something to be desired... I need more patience. If I had taken 3 hrs it would have been better. No where near perfect, but better.