I originally came to your NG user page, several years after I abandoned the website, to see what had happened to your "HOT Fiery Anger" track. It seems it has been removed by the mods for some reason.
With that aside, this is a good song. I don't know anything technical about music, so I don't know how to objectively rate it. I can say it's catchy in a nice way, it sounds good, it tells its own "story", and all instruments work well together.
It's not One Winged Angel material, hence the 4 stars and not 5.