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Ocelotlikespie

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Experimenting new angles, eh?

Usually you do an excellent coloring, and you did it again with this one, but I think you should have darken Hakurei's shades a bit, because the background, even though it's a cloud in daylight (right?), the observer would think it is a night sky. And this situation is complicated, because we have a dark section to the left and a shiny one to the right.
I noticed you used an unusual angle to place a character, but the girl flies doesn't she? I don't know, and nobody should really care. Your work is splendid and it will remain that way.

- Ocelot-sensei

I see what you mean

Then, in that case, I'm just going to point out what I like: the glowing effect. I like pretty shiny bright things, so hooray for that aspect, and also the details on the thing she's sitting.

Otanjoubi o medetou gozaimasu! (Happy Birthday!)

- Ocelot sensei

Clearly your best so far

You got all the details right and stuff, you know, coloring, shading and whatnot. Yet, I spotted something that bothers me a bit. The left character's chin is a bit, well, the way how it's turned a little too much to the right and the mouth seems to be really close to it, makes it look, uh, you get the point.
Aside from that, very attractive piece, I must say.

- Kagekiyo-sensei

Now, completely off topic. Just an opinion of mine. I think you should start including more variety in your drawings, for example, draw ponies having a tea party or a big glass demon or even some jelly beans. I guess my point here is: try to do something different. All right, so I've noticed you've recently drawn a boy. That's a nice start. But keep creating new stuff, don't just stick with the female characters, everyone knows you dominate in that area! Sorry if I sound a bit offensive, I'm just giving my honest opinion.

Can't guess who's style it is...

But then again, I'm kind of an Internet idiot, so only people I know are you, Egoraptor, and Nama-sensei.
You did this with pencils, didn't you? Hmm...Maybe not.
Moving on, not bad. You're getting the hang of proportions, even though I know you'll change your style right after you get good. Now, you did everything all right, but this one doesn't quite impress me. You get the picture.
Another thing: why didn't you draw this big, may I ask?

- Kagekiyo-gensei

suwako responds:

XD
nope, it was digital x3 as you probably guessed XD
thanks!
i did, but it won't animate if its big on NG for some reason :/ here's the big version if you want to see it: http://jadelaunders.deviantart.com/art/Sachi-Eika-156241298

Very good

You seem to have hit the nail on the head with this one, regarding both coloring and drawing. There's nothing really new I can say other than "Mission Complete".
Here's your well deserved 5/5. Suwako, you're awesome, y'know? And I don't even know you xD

- Kagekiyo-gensei

Even though it's background practice...

...all precautions must be taken, always. An example of this is the girl's left leg. It's supposed to be in perspective, but it's actually not. It just doesn't look like it is.
Yeah, the background is just spectacular. The lines aren't really straight, but then again, I've never been to or seen anything in ã<ã¾ãã'o/oo, so... lucky you, because if I did, I would be on your tail yapping about imperfections.
It's an "all right" drawing.
Yours truly,

- éZæ¿EUã'^åZ³æ-£

(Epic kanji fail, am I right?)

This one seems particularly interesting.

It seems that you have changed your coloring style, and one of the most notorious factors that proves this exact point is the clothes folds. This new technique of yours is really close to professional anime/manga, as you intended. Congratulations. May I ask the "coordinates" for the skin tone you used? I am a bit messy with those and never manage to find the most appropriate one.
You have some trouble with proportions, though. At least, I feel like you do, in certain aspects of the drawing, that is. Let us start by the body structure. At first glance, it looked like it was too thin, but then it sort of adapted itself to my sight. Then, her right hand fingers don't look so good. Maybe the thumb should be a little bit bigger? I don't have anything against the head, though, as previous reviews.
Moving on, her skirt seems to have a squared structure, and it should have, but with more detailies, as there are a lot of folds in those, I suppose.
That is all. Hold on. No, it is not. One last question: That's not the best place to have an itch during a photo, is it?
Kore wa sugoi desu, Suwako-chan. Kentou!

- Kagekiyo-gensei. (I'm a new person now)

Dang!

You're doing some intense training there, aren't you? 10/10 and that's the bottom line!

- Ocelot-gensei

The torso part or whatchamacall'it

Something's definitely not right over there, like it's too thin? I think she needs a Shoryuken in the tummy to fix that up a bit. The rest is perfect, hooray for pretty face. Oh, and the eyes are just DELICIOUS.

- Ocelot-gensei ("gensei" is "apprentice" in Japanese, right?)

Well, I didn't.

I prefer Genji.

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