This one seems particularly interesting.
It seems that you have changed your coloring style, and one of the most notorious factors that proves this exact point is the clothes folds. This new technique of yours is really close to professional anime/manga, as you intended. Congratulations. May I ask the "coordinates" for the skin tone you used? I am a bit messy with those and never manage to find the most appropriate one.
You have some trouble with proportions, though. At least, I feel like you do, in certain aspects of the drawing, that is. Let us start by the body structure. At first glance, it looked like it was too thin, but then it sort of adapted itself to my sight. Then, her right hand fingers don't look so good. Maybe the thumb should be a little bit bigger? I don't have anything against the head, though, as previous reviews.
Moving on, her skirt seems to have a squared structure, and it should have, but with more detailies, as there are a lot of folds in those, I suppose.
That is all. Hold on. No, it is not. One last question: That's not the best place to have an itch during a photo, is it?
Kore wa sugoi desu, Suwako-chan. Kentou!
- Kagekiyo-gensei. (I'm a new person now)