Ocelotlikespie's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fuck this place]

Ah. Didn't look like a friendly village anyway.

Lighting is good, colors too. But you could have done something better with the flames on the right. Well then, f*ck that place AND my review.

- Ocelot-sensei.

Rhunyc responds:

lol. Thanks man. And there is no review I could ever say "Fuck" too... Or about.. Or whatever I'm trying to say. xD Even the shitty ones you gotta appreciate. :D

But, yours is quite nice! SO thank you! :)

[Different style]

He got an A, that's all that matters.

I'm going to review this as a whole, and not as a "copy the style" drawing.
You're right about one thing: even though the drawing is pretty expressive, it just doesn't look whacky enough. Overall it's okay, and I noticed how you put that background highlight on Gregory so you feel sorry for him. I give the score of 8/10.

- Ocelot-sensei.

[RED +alt+]

An alternative background huh?

I'm still going to review it anyway. I apologize being on a review cafeine thrusting streak, too much Coca Cola, I'm afraid.
Okay, so: You made some new shiny outlines around the character and changed to a more "modern" environment. Nicely done choice - variety of colors and designs. Here's your 8.

- Ocelot-sensei.

suwako responds:

haha thanks ocelot-sensei XD
oh, no probs :3
and thanks! c:

[RED]

It's good.

I especially like the face. Nice one (as usual).
Now, I notice that as I go from up to down through this drawing, the coloring seems to be of less quality, and her shoes look rather squarish. I suggest you keep practising, and deliver the same ammount of work to every part of the drawing. I'll let the background slide this time.
Don't think of this review as an agressive one. I just want to help you to improve your skills.

- Ocelot-sensei (as I was once called by a Youtuber)

suwako responds:

thanks!
i know, idk what it is, i think i need to draw more scenery before i continue doing full illustrations. ah, well i tried to make them look like school shoes lol. guess i failed XD
oh, don't worry, i don't! i know you're only trying to help ^^
also, i took your advice about the eyes, i dunno if you can see it/i did it right ;_;

aha, i'll have to start calling you that so! XD

[Amy]

Very good

A really nice pencil drawn illustration. There's a lot to say about it, but put it into words...I gotta practice my English.
Now one thing I noticed is, in the crossed hands, her little finger seems to be a bit odd. Rather squarish, don't you think? Either way, that is my opinion.
I especially liked the way you put on that lighting effect on her hair. Pretty neat shinyness.

[Kick your own ass - THF]

Holy snap

That was, indeed, a kick ass improvement! You know, I'm gonna try and do this. Now to select a drawing...

suwako responds:

thanks!

oh, do! show me when you're done! <3

[Steampunk Halloween]

So much detail!

Hooray for lightbulbs!

[Charizard]

That's what I'm talking about!

Congratulations. You are now "archir: The Awesome". One thing, though. I think the "arms" and "legs" (sorry, forgot the technical name) are a bit small. The size should have been augmented a bit, and they should have been given a more, let's say, muscular structure. Now I'm not an expert in animal anatomy (yes, yes, I know, it's a divine beast), but I strongly believe on those two aspects that I just mentioned.
Either way, overall, I see "Jackpot" written in it.

[Catgirl +collab+]

All right!

Excellent! Just perfect. Practice makes perfect. And I think you practiced enough. 5 stars!

suwako responds:

thanks so much!

[Sachi Eika UTAUloid Cover]

As I reviewed earlier...

You scored an "okay". The colors are fantastic, as usual, but this one doesn't really "get me". Saturday morning here in Portugal, I guess. I mean, it's not morning anymore, but it was when I reviewed this, so, um... It's like I said: "Ah, what the heck, just keep making these, you're a great artist". Here's an 8 for ya.

suwako responds:

;w;

thank you, you awesome person you XD