Ocelotlikespie's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sachi Eika UTAUloid Cover #2]

Jackpot as usual.

Hey, look, I'm gonna stop reviewing your stuff. You've reached THAT level. And when people reach it, they become unstoppably awesome. Bye.

-Ocelot-sensei.

PS: Her fingers don't look so good.

[Reisen]

KOMBO BREAKER!

Just felt like saying that.
All right, you're getting too good at this. I'll have to give you a 10.

- Ocelot-sensei

[Yandere Rin]

Hooray

She's got a hanged by a meat cleaver person's blood all over her body. I noticed how you blured out the dead guy's legs. That's fantastic. And guess what? She's wearing half a school uniform. Why would anyone go to a meat warehouse on her underwear? Newground's answer: Who cares?
Okay, to sum it up, I like this. Keep it up.

- Ocelot-sensei

suwako responds:

thanks a lot, ocelot-sensei! i'm glad you like it! :3

[Dragonite]

Yay, more Pokemons

You fixed the arm problems you had with Charizard in this one, I see. Good.
Let me tell you that I am fascinated with the water in movement. So very "liquidy". Here are your 10 excellence stars. You earned them.
Oh, and, I wonder just by wondering. How would Scyther look like (even though he's not near a dragon's epicness) in real life.

[MS Paint Doodle]

-_-'

Doodle stands for doodle. Yeah, I know. Well, it's not that bad. Just not good enough to be on Newgrounds. Please forgive my jerky attitude, I have 5 evaluation tests next week, so I'm in a not so pleasant mood.

suwako responds:

nawh, it's fine, i agree with you! and sorry to hear about those tests man! good luck!

[UTAU - LOVE MUSIC]

Hm, okaaay

Body proportions, coloring and stuff seem to be fine. Just one picky tiny thing: the face lines are a bit distorted to the right. Also, the face doesn't quite fit in the rest of the head, that said, the hair. At least that's what I think.
Whatever. You say you woke up at 1 and messed around for 7 hours? Last time that happened to me was when I drank 50 gazillion liters...leters? Litters...Uh, doesn't matter. Well I drank that certain quantity of Coca Cola, and ate beans and rice and all that junk. Next thing I know, I'm in Physical Education running into the wall and tripping on my shadow every five seconds. Hooray.

- Ocelot-sensei

[Nollaig Shona Duit]

Screw constructive criticism

This is raw! Yeah, that's what I'm talkin' about!
I give to you tha 10 out of 10. Congratufuckinglations, you have reached ProGodBeastMode in illustrations.
Oh, wait. Oopsy-daisy, something's missing in the background. But then again she could be in some sort of small mountain. "The Magic Christmas Tree in Fukuyama." Okay, that was dumb.

- Ocelot-sensei

[+Commission+ Alyndra]

I like her stance

Looks like she's about to strangle someone. I find the environment pretty interesting, with the giant pink grass and that floating mist.
Only one question though. Is that thing she's holding a gun? Because, if so, that's we-weird one, I'll tell you that. I'm not sure it is a pistol or not, but in case you think of drawing one, try picking a reference and draw it from that. You probably know this, but I'm gonna tell you anyhow. In manga, the human anatomy is twitched a little. However this does not happen with objects and other non-human elements, like cats and waterfalls for instance. Anime creators try to be as realistic as possible while creating the scenery, but still maintaining its cartoony look.
Ok, overall I like everything except the thing in her hands. End of story.

- Ocelot-sensei

suwako responds:

thanks! x3

and yes, i totally get what you mean about the gun - it looks awful, i should have used a ref DX

thanks for the helpful review as always, ocelot-sensei! XD

[VOCALOID Doujinshi - Cover]

Pretty pretty. (?)

Indeed the background is awkward, but I see you're not particularly interested in changing it. In fact, I like the background a bit, it's interesting, but still not "the stuff". As for Miku, I only have one thing to say: "FLAWLESS VICTORY!" (crappish MK reference). She's perfectly depicted here, good work. So, in short, background gets thumbs down and character thumbs up.

- Ocelot-sensei

[Fruits Basket Bookmark]

Maybe you shouldn't sell this one...

Your coloring is all well and good, but the thing that bugs me here is the eyes. I think a guy below me has mentioned that, but still. Manga/Anime characters are known for their big eyes, however, excessively big eyes will make them look like aliens, no offense though. They just don't "fit" in the face, know what I'm saying?
Overall, drawing and coloring are both good, but the eyes blow it. I feel like you don't exactly dominate body proportions, so work on that.

- Ocelot-sensei

P.S.: OMG, I'm gonna be spammed with "useless review"

suwako responds:

yeah, they are a tad big, but that's actually what i was kind of going for (although maybe i overdid it a bit XD) i dunno, i just wanted to try some more shojo looking style ^^
and yus, proportions are being worked on XD i hope that with enough practice i can improve on it soon D:

thanks as always, ocelot-sensei! you're always a big help to me! <33333

lolololololol XDDDDDDD don't worry what other people think, i think your review is awesome, as always!